The text needs to move further towards the left but otherwise I don't think it looks bad. I cannot tell properly however until I put things on the page opposite and see how they look together.
At this moment in time I imagine I will put the poems that my Gran wrote for my Grandad opposite and then the spread will have a running theme. If I do this I think I will change the photograph of my Gran on her own to one of her with my Grandad.
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